My half of the most inspiring - aquariann's [link] sweet beauty "the fool" originally found here: [link]
Now this piece had me in allsorts, i wasnt particualy sure on wether she was -in my mind- of innocent beauty or evil eligence....
sooooo I ended up mixing the two together....and funny enough i came up with a miss treated angel.
I wrote my part lyrically (as usual in my work), and follows a story of a girl down and broke for whatever reasons....She drinks to get drunk and ease the pain, and she works the men for money with her beauty and touching smile.
To end all things she cant take it anymore and breaks down.
I guess what inspired me to take it this way (outside of the direct inspiration of the drawing itself) was the stories of my a female friend and how she has been treated by guys around her and driven to suicidal extremes and bottled depression. And the moral behind that is simply....us men can be so evil in so many ways or in my words - fucken criminal.
Anyways i hope you enjoy and i hope to find your comments critical and as dam right mean as posible
Jordan, it is amazing! Wonderful words. I saw her as a mistreated angel, as well. I think my favorite lines are
"even stars so bright
she'll still be laying here
feeling tortured, fainted by a certain shade of red
when night falls, all knights tall, with a simple kiss for sane."
Gorgeous.
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You might also like to know that me and my band have started putting music to this piece....and its coming along pretty nicely....ill have to get it on the net for you when we are done
hehee cheers luv
we soooo gotta do this again sweety....your work could inspire the never before inspired, truely beautiful.
I must say the way you draw your characters eyes paint a millions stories, eyes in my view are the most inportant thing about a person and you nail it luv....
wow, s really cool. i wish i had a way with words like that. *sigh* the patterns and the verbal imagery is magnifecent. pleas keep it up!!!
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If you wanna know the truth about my life
It's a mess it's a mess it's a mess it's a mess
If you wanna know the truth about my life
I confess I confess I confess I confess
If you wanna know the truth about my life it's in disarray
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If you wanna know the truth about my life
It's a mess it's a mess it's a mess it's a mess
If you wanna know the truth about my life
I confess I confess I confess I confess
If you wanna know the truth about my life it's in disarray
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Dark and silent and complete. I found freedom.
~Geek-Club
"even stars so bright
she'll still be laying here
feeling tortured, fainted by a certain shade of red
when night falls, all knights tall, with a simple kiss for sane."
Gorgeous.
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.drown in my sea of fantasy art magnets, bookmarks, cards, and more at aquariann.artfire.com.
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Palumbo lives here
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we soooo gotta do this again sweety....your work could inspire the never before inspired, truely beautiful.
I must say the way you draw your characters eyes paint a millions stories, eyes in my view are the most inportant thing about a person and you nail it luv....
Thanx again dude, luv ya.
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Palumbo lives here
[link] <--My gallery - Make a comment -
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If you wanna know the truth about my life
It's a mess it's a mess it's a mess it's a mess
If you wanna know the truth about my life
I confess I confess I confess I confess
If you wanna know the truth about my life it's in disarray
Neways cheers luv muwaaa!
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Palumbo lives here
[link] <--My gallery - Make a comment -
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If you wanna know the truth about my life
It's a mess it's a mess it's a mess it's a mess
If you wanna know the truth about my life
I confess I confess I confess I confess
If you wanna know the truth about my life it's in disarray